Lp 1753536: Clarify release notes

It is not universally true that the patron needs to negotiate with the
owning library for more renewals, so we try to make it clear that this
is not always the case in the release notes.

Signed-off-by: Jason Stephenson <jason@sigio.com>
Signed-off-by: Galen Charlton <gmc@equinoxinitiative.org>

diff --git a/docs/RELEASE_NOTES_NEXT/OPAC/LP1753536_items_out_lib.adoc b/docs/RELEASE_NOTES_NEXT/OPAC/LP1753536_items_out_lib.adoc
index fcb9a99..caa0520 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/RELEASE_NOTES_NEXT/OPAC/LP1753536_items_out_lib.adoc
+++ b/docs/RELEASE_NOTES_NEXT/OPAC/LP1753536_items_out_lib.adoc
@@ -1,11 +1,14 @@
 New Column in Items Out Display
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-A new column, Owning Library, is now optionally available for the Items 
-Out display which shows the owning library of the item (not necessarily 
-the library at which the item was picked up).  When a patron has run
- out of renewals, the owning library is the one with whom the patron 
-will negotiate additional renewals, and clicking on the library 
-name will provide contact information for that library.
+A new column, Owning Library, is now optionally available for the OPAC
+Items Out display which shows the owning library of the item (not
+necessarily the library at which the item was picked up).  Clicking on
+the library name will provide contact information for that library.
+This is useful for When a patron has run out of renewals and the
+owning library, not the patron's home library, is the one with whom
+the patron will negotiate additional renewals.  If the patron will
+negotiate additional renewals with their home library or the checkout
+library, then display of this field is superfluous.
 
-The column is controlled by the organization setting 
-"opac.show_owning_library_column".
+The display of this column is controlled by the organization setting
+"opac.show_owning_library_column."