tweaks suggested by Equinox attorney Richard Bennett

- clarify possibly ambiguous wording of reference to
  trademark symbols
- clarify the confusion clause in section 2.4

Signed-off-by: Galen Charlton <gmc@esilibrary.com>

diff --git a/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt b/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
index 9d669b3..667192f 100644 (file)
--- a/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
+++ b/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ followed by a symbol for, as applicable, a registered trademark
 (^®) or an unregistered trademark (^TM). For example: "Evergreen^®"
 or "EGILS^TM".
 
-This requirement is waived in all contexts where such marks are 
+This requirement is waived in all contexts where such symbols are 
 not required to protect the intellectual property rights associated
 with the Marks, such as email, online discussion, and academic papers.  
 We encourage the use of the applicable symbols whenever possible, but 
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ display the symbol is waived for this circumstance.
 You may not use the Marks in any of the following ways without 
 express written permission from Conservancy:
 
- * In any way that creates a likelihood of confusion as to the 
-   identity of the Evergreen Project, the provenance of its software, 
-   or the software's license.
+ * In any way that creates a likelihood of confusion between your products
+   and services and those of the Evergreen Project, the provenance of its
+   software, or the software's license.
 
  * In any way that indicates a greater degree of association between you
    and the Evergreen Project than actually exists.