edits from Tony Sebro

- reflowing text
- reverting "the between your products and services and
  those of the Evergreen Project" change

Signed-off-by: Galen Charlton <gmc@esilibrary.com>

diff --git a/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt b/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
index 675c983..465de60 100644 (file)
--- a/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
+++ b/evergreen-trademark-policy.txt
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@ Conservancy ("Conservancy"). Conservancy holds rights in the Marks
 with its non-profit charitable mission.
 
 Conservancy has adopted this Policy to protect the Marks and to 
-make sure that the identity of the Evergreen software and its free and 
-open source nature is clear to everyone. By using this Policy, the 
-Evergreen Project can spread the use of the Evergreen software 
+make sure that the identity of the Evergreen software and its free 
+and open source nature is clear to everyone. By using this Policy, 
+the Evergreen Project can spread the use of the Evergreen software 
 while making sure that the Marks (as defined below) are protected 
 in a way that's consistent with U.S. trademark law.  This Policy is 
 written to allow all clear and appropriate use of the Marks while 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ to the other sections):
   modifications including but not limited to: the enabling or 
   disabling of certain features by default, translations into 
   other languages, changes required for compatibility with a 
-  particular operating system distribution, or the inclusion of 
+  particular operating system distribution, or the inclusion of
   bug-fix patches.
 
 2. To identify the Evergreen software as a distinct component of a 
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ display the symbol is waived for this circumstance.
 You may not use the Marks in any of the following ways without 
 express written permission from Conservancy:
 
- * In any way that creates a likelihood of confusion between your products
-   and services and those of the Evergreen Project, the provenance of its
-   software, or the software's license.
+ * In any way that creates a likelihood of confusion as to the 
+   identity of the Evergreen Project, the provenance of its software, 
+   or the software's license.
 
  * In any way that indicates a greater degree of association between you
    and the Evergreen Project than actually exists.