final tweaks to StaffclientInstallation;

diff --git a/1.6/admin/staffclientinstallation.xml b/1.6/admin/staffclientinstallation.xml
index 653b49d..8a11420 100644 (file)
--- a/1.6/admin/staffclientinstallation.xml
+++ b/1.6/admin/staffclientinstallation.xml
@@ -534,8 +534,8 @@
                                                        clean <literal>staging</literal> directory containing the
                                                        finished Staff Client that can then be copied to other
                                                        machines. To do this, execute the following commands (remember
-                                                       to replace <literal>DOWNLOAD_DIRECTORY</literal> and
-                                                       <literal>STAGING_DIRECTORY</literal> with the appropriate
+                                                       to replace <emphasis>DOWNLOAD_DIRECTORY</emphasis> and
+                                                       <emphasis>STAGING_DIRECTORY</emphasis> with the appropriate
                                                        paths):</para>
 <screen>
        <userinput>
@@ -621,7 +621,7 @@
                                                        user, navigate to the temporary directory where you downloaded 
                                                        the <systemitem class="osname">Windows</systemitem> installer 
                                                        file, then execute it with the <application>wine</application>
-                                                       application (remember to replace <literal>VERSION</literal> with
+                                                       application (remember to replace <emphasis>VERSION</emphasis> with
                                                        the release number of the Staff Client you downloaded):</para>
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        <userinput>
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@
                        process:</para>
                        <simplesect>
                                <title>
-                                       <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_BUILD_ID</envar>
+                                       Build Variable <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_BUILD_ID</envar>
                                </title>
                                <para>During the normal <emphasis>make install</emphasis> Evergreen server-side
                                software build process, the variable defaults to an automatically generated
@@ -693,18 +693,18 @@
                                source directory with a different <envar>BUILD_ID</envar>.</para>
                                <para>As the <systemitem class="username">opensrf</systemitem> user,
                                execute the following commands to build the Staff Client (remember to replace
-                               <literal>NEW_VERSION</literal> with an appropriate value):</para>
+                               <emphasis>NEW_VERSION</emphasis> with an appropriate value):</para>
 <screen>
        <userinput>
        # as the opensrf user:
        cd /home/opensrf/Evergreen-ILS-1.6.1.2/Open-ILS/xul/staff_client
-       make STAFF_CLIENT_BUILD_ID=NEWVERSION  build
+       make STAFF_CLIENT_BUILD_ID=NEW_VERSION  build
        </userinput>
 </screen>
                        </simplesect>
                        <simplesect>
                                <title>
-                                       <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_VERSION</envar>
+                                       Build Variable <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_VERSION</envar>
                                </title>
                                <para>During the normal <emphasis>make install</emphasis> Evergreen server-side
                                software build process, the variable is pulled automatically from a README file
@@ -739,7 +739,7 @@
                        </simplesect>
                        <simplesect>
                                <title>
-                                       <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_STAMP_ID</envar>
+                                       Build Variable <envar>STAFF_CLIENT_STAMP_ID</envar>
                                </title>
                                <para>During the normal <emphasis>make install</emphasis> Evergreen
                                server-side software build process, the variable is generated from
@@ -895,10 +895,9 @@
 </screen>
                                <para>You can also combine Javascript review and compression, and also perform a
                                <emphasis>developer build</emphasis>.</para>
-                               <para>As the <systemitem class="username">opensrf</systemitem> user, run the
-                               following commands from the Staff Client source directory:</para>
-                               <note>In the following <command>make</command> below, the order of options is
-                               important.</note>
+                               <para>As the <systemitem class="username">opensrf</systemitem> user, run 
+                               the following <command>make</command> command from the Staff Client source directory
+                               (the order of options is important):</para>
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        <userinput>
        # as the opensrf user:
@@ -1133,7 +1132,7 @@
                                                <systemitem class="domainname">http://example.com</systemitem>).</para>
                                                <para>As the <systemitem class="username">opensrf</systemitem> user,
                                                execute the following commands to build the Staff Client (remember to
-                                               replace <literal>SOME_URL</literal> with an appropriate value)
+                                               replace <emphasis>SOME_URL</emphasis> with an appropriate value)
                                                :</para>
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        <userinput>
@@ -1341,7 +1340,7 @@
                        <para>The Staff Client must be assigned to a library and given a unique name before it
                        will connect fully to the Evergreen server. The only restriction is that the workstation's
                        name must be unique within the assigned library. Make sure to select a workstation name
-                       that you will remember later, and reflects the role, purpose, and/or location of a
+                       that you will remember later, one that reflects the role, purpose, and/or location of a
                        particular computer. These names will come up later in statistical reporting, and can also
                        be handy when troubleshooting.</para>
                        <mediaobject>